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Help with my story, please?

Tuesday, December 8th, 2009
Fort Collins
Karly asked:


Okay so.. I’ve been trying to figure out what my story is going to be about. I just dont know where its going. :/

Characters:

Brookelle Masen (female) 16 yearsold
Graycie Masen (female- Brookelle’s Sister) 14 years old
Mr. Black (male - Brookelle and Graycie’s dad) 40-45 years old
Damien Black (male ) 16 years old
Gabriel Adams (male - Damiens best friend)
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So what i got so far is…
Brookelle’s mom dies in a car accident, Her dad, Graycie, and her move to Fort Collins, Colordado.
She has a really rough time and is kinda depressed.
No one really talks to her because shes new and she meets Damien. A 16 year old boy that is really sweet and nice and a lot of people like him. He has the Black longish hair, Side swept bangs, Blue eyes, and lip ring. Where Brookelle has long black hair, green eyes, colorful and is random person thats really cool.
well… Damiens friends like to have fun, skip school, and have fun, but he doesnt. and Brookelle likes to stay home, take care of her sister, and do homework.

They become really good friends. Damien helps her become happier and Brookelle help him find himself through everything.

I need a really good TWIST.
i dont want to make the story Cliche so yeah.
if you could just help me find something to do with it (details)

that was just a VERY short summary of what its about so yeah.

i would appreciate it SO much!

PLEASE AND THANK YOU :D

RIEMAN

writing a love story, any suggestions?

Saturday, November 21st, 2009
Fort Collins
Karly asked:


Ok, so far i got the names (some) and the town that they move to (Fort Collins, Colorado.)
The story is about a girl named Elizabeth. Her dad, twin sister (Annabelle), and her move to Fort Collins, Colorado from Santa Barbra, California, after her mother dies from a car accident. Here sister and her are 16 and sophomores in high school. She likes to write, read, and play the guitar. and her sister likes to dance, sing, and is sporty. Its her first day of school at Fort Collins High and she meets this boy but shows no intrest even though she really likes him. He falls for her. Annabelle falls for his brother.

I need a twist or something more…. i was gonna say that her mom gave them both rings for there sixteenth birthday and like the ring protects them or something but i dont know.. I need some help. Please and thank you.

CLOUGH