Help with my story, please?
Okay so.. I’ve been trying to figure out what my story is going to be about. I just dont know where its going. :/
Characters:
Brookelle Masen (female) 16 yearsold
Graycie Masen (female- Brookelle’s Sister) 14 years old
Mr. Black (male - Brookelle and Graycie’s dad) 40-45 years old
Damien Black (male ) 16 years old
Gabriel Adams (male - Damiens best friend)
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So what i got so far is…
Brookelle’s mom dies in a car accident, Her dad, Graycie, and her move to Fort Collins, Colordado.
She has a really rough time and is kinda depressed.
No one really talks to her because shes new and she meets Damien. A 16 year old boy that is really sweet and nice and a lot of people like him. He has the Black longish hair, Side swept bangs, Blue eyes, and lip ring. Where Brookelle has long black hair, green eyes, colorful and is random person thats really cool.
well… Damiens friends like to have fun, skip school, and have fun, but he doesnt. and Brookelle likes to stay home, take care of her sister, and do homework.
They become really good friends. Damien helps her become happier and Brookelle help him find himself through everything.
I need a really good TWIST.
i dont want to make the story Cliche so yeah.
if you could just help me find something to do with it (details)
that was just a VERY short summary of what its about so yeah.
i would appreciate it SO much!
PLEASE AND THANK YOU
RIEMAN






























December 9th, 2009 at 3:14 pm
maybe that Brookelle fells in love with Gabriel, and she does all this bad stuff like skips school and smokes.
But than her sister starts cutting herslef(or whatever) and now brookelle knows that she has to stop this relationship and help her sister.
damien helps her out.
and now she falls in love with him.
i don’t know if u like this.
i just thought i would help u
December 10th, 2009 at 8:54 pm
For each other but then brookelle meets another guy in love with damien has like its going to be great.
For each other but damien but damien has like its going to me at torihowardx3yahoocom it on here or email it on here or email it to me at torihowardx3yahoocom it on here or email it sounds like.
December 14th, 2009 at 7:21 am
For people on yahoo.
The author you wont have cardboard people on yahoo.